wrd.wthiin.woord: orifices oculaires du pare-brise

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orifices oculaires du pare-brise

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Anonym sa...: Et l'on comprend un poème, non par lorsqu'on en saisit les pensées ni mêmes lorsqu'on s'en représente les relations complexes, mais lorsqu'on est amené par lui au mode d'existence qu'il signifie, provoqué à une certain tension, exaltation ou destruction de soi-même.
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Je dis mot:

glissant.

l'encrier comporte
aucun signataire
sans du papier
et les dessous
qu'il installe
à la surface
levé par le doigt
et c'est tout du fait
de la pensée

(de la feuille imprimée grande)

du mot il est déjà
ayant trait à une matérialité
dans la destruction
d'une frêle l'organisme

(elle garde à nos yeux son secret)

l'y rattache une pagination
dans expansion totale
où semble un hasard capter l'idée
ou les mots
jusqu'à sacrer
une langue
faire signe
la coulée d'un texte

(des quelque vingt lettres)

devant l'étonnement
quel que soit le désordre visible
hors expérience, hors phénomène
dans lire en comestible fête

aussi les paroles silencieux
à leur mutisme
bout-à-bout-à-bout
se vide l'autre,
gommer

(de clairvoyance d'une inarticulés )

glissière.

- - - - -; 18 oktober, 2008 18:30
William Keckler sa...: God, you got the fallopians and everything.

You realize Matthew Barney is gonna hunt you down and kill ya, right.

Because you're out-thinking him visually just about every day.

What a beautiful description of "negative capability" the cleverly "named" sinon gives...

are you sinon?

is sinon a collapse of sine qua non upon itself like a blackhole?

whoever it is, i bet they love sobin...

are they older? because the fetishistic materiality of writing which they are poeticizing is almost over...

who uses paper except for grocery lists anymore?

i suppose they can switch and do a phenomenology of keystroke and light, palimpsest, for the computer...

being french. i mean.

it should come quite naturally.; 18 oktober, 2008 22:46
mike di tomasso sa...: absolutly amazing stuff Troy. You blow my mind everytime I see your blog.; 19 oktober, 2008 06:25
troylloyd sa...: ta Mike

you know, you've been motivational for me, you have so much enthusiasm, energy & natural talent -- i'm so glad we got "hook'd up" so early on
& continue transatlantic transactions of poetry makings.; 19 oktober, 2008 10:11
troylloyd sa...: hey William

i was hoping you'd leave a commment b/c you know French so well -- i don't know French at all really.

are they older? because the fetishistic materiality of writing which they are poeticizing is almost over...

who uses paper except for grocery lists anymore?

i suppose they can switch and do a phenomenology of keystroke and light, palimpsest, for the computer...

inna way, the poem is about technology b/c it was so easy to have immediate access to the material.

but, as you probably know, many of the online translation services really suck, hell, googtrans actually translates " Mallarmé "
as " Whitman " in many cases & scrambles up alotta seedming simple things.

this thing came about b/c i started reading a Derrida piece call'd "The Double Session" in the book Dissemination, it's been awhile since i've read any high-theory stuff, but i was really gettin' into it, Derrida is on top-game when he's talkin' about Mallarmé !

the zipper thing uses some words lifted from D. quoting M.

the source material for the cmmmt textpoem is this:
"'Every Splurge on the Vellum': The Silence in Progress of Dante, Mallarmé and Joyce"

even the blogpost title, "orifices oculaires du pare-brise" comes from someone talking about a Cit 2 C V, which is here:
2CV

i am curious tho, if my cut'npaste construction "worked" , where a reader familiar w/ French could read it & say that it's a "poem"?

- - -; 19 oktober, 2008 10:26
troylloyd sa...: oh yeah, also many words/phrases came straight from Mallarmé via:

Le Livre, instrument spirituel (Variations sur un sujet)

- - -; 19 oktober, 2008 10:40
Andrei Molotiu sa...: Hey, Mallarme!

Troy, I could talk to you for years about Mallarme. For centuries. He's my favorite poet, bar none. I've published a translation of one of his poems. Not to mention "The double session" may be my favorite Derrida essay ever. We have to talk again soon.; 23 oktober, 2008 04:34
Andrei Molotiu sa...: I should add: a couple of years ago I showed some of my abstract comics to a friend, and she said: "Wow, Mallarmean!" And I realized she was totally right (admittedly, she knew about my obsession with M., but I hadn't quite put the two together consciously). I don't think I'd be doing what I'm doing if I hadn't learned what I've learned (about ink, about paper, about inscription, about the act of reading, about dissemination especially) from Mallarme.; 23 oktober, 2008 04:38
troylloyd sa...: "I don't think I'd be doing what I'm doing if I hadn't learned what I've learned (about ink, about paper, about inscription, about the act of reading, about dissemination especially) from Mallarme.

hey Andrei:

i feel much the same way, in my personal mythos, Mallarmé is to modern poetics what Duchamp is to modern art.

those dice are still rollin'
&
that urinal is still pissin'

the version of The Double Session i'm reading was translated by Barbara Johnson & she is an excellent translator, i dig how she did the job so well.

i'll get in touch soon!; 24 oktober, 2008 04:52
ArtSparker sa...: "Shall I uncrumple this much crumpled thing?"

-Wallace Stevens; 26 oktober, 2008 13:31

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